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ITSACOOKBOOK - Sippin'

Postby ITSACOOKBOOK » Wed May 16, 2012 3:39 am

I'm pretty new to producing only been at it a few months or so, but this is my first attempt at future garage. Let me know how you think I could do better on my next track, I would really appreciate it. Also if anyone is interested in a collab I'd be down. I think I have good ideas and am decent at sound design I just need someone with musical know-how to help me bring my sounds together. Super stoked to hear back from you guys thanks in advance for any feedback. Super stoked to get involved in the future-garage forum community. http://soundcloud.com/itsacookbook/itsacookbook-sippin
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Re: ITSACOOKBOOK - Sippin'

Postby M@B » Wed May 16, 2012 4:17 am

As a whole, the track seems washed out in reverb. Maybe dry that up a bit. The drums are a bit clunky and lurch-y, and the hi-hats could use more groove to guide the track. The fact that you are new to producing in general is impressive because your vocal cuts are definitely fun and thuggish, we could use some more of that around these parts! I am but an infant myself so I hope this was helpful.
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Re: ITSACOOKBOOK - Sippin'

Postby ITSACOOKBOOK » Wed May 16, 2012 5:52 am

M@B wrote:As a whole, the track seems washed out in reverb. Maybe dry that up a bit. The drums are a bit clunky and lurch-y, and the hi-hats could use more groove to guide the track. The fact that you are new to producing in general is impressive because your vocal cuts are definitely fun and thuggish, we could use some more of that around these parts! I am but an infant myself so I hope this was helpful.

Yeah I guess did go a bit over board with the reverb. This was my first time using quantize I'm definitely still figuring out this whole "swing" thing haha I suppose I should read up on the topic in some of the threads on here.Thanks so much for the input man I really appreciate it.
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Re: ITSACOOKBOOK - Sippin'

Postby Pyro » Sun May 20, 2012 2:06 pm

Nice approach..
The beats are drowned by the synths however which will drown the groove on bigger sound systems at least..
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Re: ITSACOOKBOOK - Sippin'

Postby ITSACOOKBOOK » Sun May 20, 2012 11:34 pm

Pyro wrote:Nice approach..
The beats are drowned by the synths however which will drown the groove on bigger sound systems at least..

Yeah I need to get some monitors so I can get some better mix downs. thanks for the response!
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Re: ITSACOOKBOOK - Sippin'

Postby Pyro » Mon May 21, 2012 9:02 pm

It's already helpful to just compare the sound with other tracks of a similar style, and to play it in different occasions on the road (not in the studio surrounding).
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Re: ITSACOOKBOOK - Sippin'

Postby ITSACOOKBOOK » Wed May 23, 2012 7:02 am

Pyro wrote:It's already helpful to just compare the sound with other tracks of a similar style, and to play it in different occasions on the road (not in the studio surrounding).

I'll try that out thanks, dude!
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